I received feedback from my tutor, Aaron, and he suggested that I work on my grammatical errors and punctuation.
I also noticed a couple of errors with style and punctuation that we can work on in class.
I also noticed a couple of grammatical errors. Remember to read over your work, again and again and again.
Throughout the past six weeks, I have been proofreading my work a lot more. And therefore picking up mistakes that I usually would have missed. I have enjoyed using a blog (for the first time) for an course, as I think it shows a journey throughout the term.